valentine

[johnny trance]

condescending saints, descending angels
grip the coal black sky
a language etched in rusty steel
the force of
incredible will shifitng the
backbone of impossible chance
her love grew tired
and cut the threads
and bled goodbyes
into the shallow pools
of impotent thought

[Bob Berkowitz]

Thanks for the valentine poem

[johnny trance]

its not about you.

[d.willis]

coal, steel, & love

just like the rest of the valentine bullshit at hallmark

[johnny trance]

your back d!

[Ryan McBain]

LOL you guys crack me up. Nice avatars by the way.

Nice poem, I like the bled goodbyes line