the last word

[hymes]

THE LAST WORDS THAT CAME OUT HER MOUTH WERE
IT'S OVER
NO MATTER HOW MUCH I LOVED HER
I COULDNT CHANGE HER/SHES A PERFECT STRANGER NOW
HOW COULD THIS HAVE HAPPENED?
I SPEND TIME ASKING QUESTIONS AND THEN GIVE MYSELF ANSWERS
LIKE WH IS LOVE A CANCER?
AND HAS ANYONE DIED FROM LOVE?
CAUSE IVE SEEN LOVE DIE.........
AFTER SOMEONE TRYS AND TRYS AND CRYS
LOVE BEGENS TO BLEED FROM YOUR EYES
HER WORDS WERE "TEARS CAN EASILY BE WIPED UP"
BUT WHAT DOES THE SOUL BLEED?
CAUSE MINE FEELS LIKE AN EMPTY CUP
LOVE LEFT ME SARROW AND SHALLOW
SEE A BEAUTIFUL GIRL WALKS BY
AND I CANT EVEN SAY "HELLO HOW U DOING"
CAUSE MY MIND IS REUINED/THINKING ALL FEMALES ARE PALE
LOOKING AT WOMAN SAYING LIE , LIE ,LIE.........
WAITING FOR THE TRUTH BUT EVEN THATS A LIE
HER LAST WORDS WERE "IT'S OVER"
BUT I STILL AM IN LOVE WITH HER..........

[Onix]

Im glad and sad you feel that way, glad because there is no better inspiration than a woman, sad because there is no greater pain than a woman.

[StaRgaZer]

BUT WHAT DOES THE SOUL BLEED?
CAUSE MINE FEELS LIKE AN EMPTY CUP
LOVE LEFT ME SARROW AND SHALLOW
.... I like these lines.... It sucks though that both genders have a pretty negetive view of the opposite sex... genuine people are rare

[Onix]

Im glad and sad you feel that way, glad because there is no better inspiration than a woman, sad because there is no greater pain than a woman.

I read this thing again today, it made much more sense second time around. You're in an ungly place Hymes, get out, do things, see other girls, cuz damn you're in an ugly place

[hymes]

thanx for the feed back, I usally write whatever im going through, so this piece is in the present............

[Image]

Love is all powerful. It can suffocate you from within, when you lose it, but make you breathlessly awaiting more, when you find it. Either way it takes your breath away. If you realize you are just as powerful, in mind, to turn it off whenever you chose, then you may not suffer as long. My belief is that love is the feeling itself. Everyone can find it, if the people involved in the feeling are both willing to "fall in love" at the same time. But when one person is no longer readily available to desire such love, and takes their heart away, the other party is left saddened and desperately searching to be loved by their partner, once again. You're better than she, if she was too weak to move forward and overcome... Turn off the feeling and move forward. If she is out for head games and is testing the waters to see if you'll chase her, it'll shake her up to see you moving forward happily without her. Eventually she'll return with her tail between her legs, begging to be loved by you. You can then decide if she's right for you on your own terms. If you decide to love her again, beware of the games she plays, because all too often you'll be back where you are now... That's my advice. Believe me, as I have been in my current relationship for two and a half long played out years...(Now I know how and when to "play" and I usually make out, in the end, as the one with the most points =) Good luck and great poem!

[hymes]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE FEEDBACK ,THESE ARE JUST THE RIGHT WORDS I NEEDED TO HEAR, COULDNT HAVE COME AT A MORE PERFECT TIME THEN WHEN I READ THEM. " IM LOVING AND LEARNING " THANKS FOR THE ADVICE .......................................ONE