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  • Suburban Life

    Influenced by mass of paper
    Just a suburban household baker
    Gotta stay on his feet
    Make the front payment every week
    Keep it quite and hush hush like a mime
    The faint odor's the only sign
    "Suburban life aint wut it seems"------------------Kotton Mouth Kings
    Everyone chasing the american dreams
    While this boys rising up on the scene
    Clean cut with the docs and AE
    Never suspected the wad of cheese
    Payin his own cell bill
    Coverin the tab for the 100$ meal
    Slicin rocks and bricks like a orange pealer
    Its the 16 year old suburban dealer

  • #2
    Naw, Stop

    Aye, sorry... But dawg this joint was weak. I know you can do better.
    Honestly, you sound like you just got started rapping.
    Last edited by Bishops; 08-30-2004, 12:17 PM.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by TheBear
      i dunno bout this one, yall both had sum tough lines but yall both had sum kinda shit ones. Harmon, just cut the begining of that shit, ur just wanna be slim and it doesnt even make sense. Pimp, id cut the listin guns part, dont sound right.
      You got alot of nerve to judge Harmon and Pimp's lyrics and then tell them what to cut out. Dawg, you suck. Both them *****z drop some tighter verses then you.

      An also if you gettin' offended by what I'm saying. By all means you can challenge me to a fuckin' battle. Cuz *****, you'd get cooked. So think twice before you judge someone's shit. Check yo shit first.

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      • #4
        (o_o)

        dag!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by TheBear
          Influenced by mass of paper
          Just a suburban household baker
          Gotta stay on his feet
          Make the front payment every week
          Keep it quite and hush hush like a mime
          The faint odor's the only sign
          That whole shit right here sucked. Fo'real he got some nerve to tell someone what and what not to do with they're verses. Dawg, like I said. If you offended challenge me then. An put those weak verses against mines. An we'll see who wins.

          Matter of Fact, fuck it. I challenge you to a freestyle battle. Doesn't matter how many lines. Just bust it. An ya better answer my challenge. Who he think he is Future from 8mile. *****, got better chances writing a "Rhyming for Idiots" book for kids. This ***** suck. Be a man and step to me. Don't be a bitch.

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          • #6
            you fuckin ****** bishop, this is poetry not rap, god ur fuckin stupid.

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            • #7
              *****, ya poem and ya raps suck. Fuck you and that corny shit you speak. Ya big lip beast. Haha

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              • #8
                truth

                whats good bishops, this shit needs to be settled, a 2vs2 rap game, me n bear vs you n harmon, i'll make the thread

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