Passion

[Image]

Through paper painting and daring eyes
If I should stare, you steal breath's sighs
My heart's ablaze amongst desire
Your tempt allures, ignites my fire
You're like strong currents of a flood
Flowing swiftly through my blood
You're a drug and I'm a fiend
A sensual beauty in all I've dreamed
Take a tour with me, this pleasure
Awake your soul and offer treasure
I dreamt of Gardner who planted seeds
Long-stemmed roses, grew free of weeds
Read Chinese, telling of comfort's fortune
Prayed for love in deep proportion
I request you as my lover and my best friend
The artist who paints of our seamless end

[StaRgaZer]

Long time no see.. er read I guess... but nice post... I like these lines the best

"You're like strong currents of a flood
Flowing swiftly through my blood
You're a drug and I'm a fiend"

Good piece...

[Genesis]

Nice, flowed well in my head too. You got skill. Nice word play and dictation.