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    Hey hey people Im back, after a long break, I see alot has changed, but still the good old writing. stay sweet boys....:kiss:


    This one is entitled "Just like he does"
    I have nothing special left to give.
    Everything I had left, you took,
    and now I have nothing to give him,
    Even though he gave me all he had
    and even tried to give me the world,
    nothing you ever would have done.
    so now I try to run away from all the pain you gave me
    With my happy face on…
    But what about the inside?
    Is there such a mask that can hide such a hole?
    I don’t feel the new love but remember the old.
    My chest aches from the cold of my loveless heart.
    I remember the way you used to hold me, touch me and never let me go…
    Just like he does…
    I remember how you would always ignore me when other girls prettier than me
    are around
    Just like he does…
    I remember how you left me with not so much as a goodbye.
    Alone with my broken heart that wouldn’t mend whatever I tried.
    He hasn’t yet… but will he?
    Just like you did?
    Last edited by Tearful_eyes; 11-01-2003, 11:00 PM.

  • #2
    Nice poem, welcome back to the board

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    • #3
      good stuff tearful!

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      • #4
        This was an ok piece....i like the fact that this was pure emotion with no thought involved but i was really feeling it...anywayyz keep droppe....

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