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    a sweet sunset escape
    i saw it reflected once in your tired eyes
    but like she told me twice before,
    it was probably all in my mind
    but like a sweet sunset find,
    what was once lost behind those emerald eyes
    will forever dance in step with the
    lonely desert sky~


  • #2
    You didn't need the picture. The poem had more detail...

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    • #3
      as night fades
      so does he
      the city streets
      send him back home
      but not alone; he's on his way
      taxis and drunks clear crooked paths
      back into a midnight mist
      back into the myriad of a tortured past
      still cold amongst the warmest friends
      and blanketed by eyes stuck on the outside looking in
      "memories like fingerprints are slowly raising"

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      • #4
        Originally posted by johnny trance
        "memories like fingerprints are slowly raising"
        I like that line a lot man. Nice drop.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Ryan McBain
          I like that line a lot man. Nice drop.
          its a pearl jam lyric.

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          • #6
            smooth. as always
            with lines like that how do you keep the chicks off of you??

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            • #7
              Originally posted by BleedingAkasha
              smooth. as always
              with lines like that how do you keep the chicks off of you??
              welcome back!

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