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    Take Me Home

    What happened to me? What happened to control?
    I'm caught up in another world
    I don't even know
    Could I find my way out in this image, Accepting every flaw?
    A mind full of shit, Contemplating I am shit
    Strong I stand, yet on the verge to fall
    What am I to do with these voices who stalks?
    Reaching for freedon and closure
    For this isn't my fault
    This deadly obsession I never thought,
    One time for Seven years
    If only these walls could talk
    To walk my grounds you never can,
    I face this alone
    Only starvation understands,
    And I am who I can't stand
    This world so full of torture, I'm twisted with every lone,
    This war I battle, I fear to lose
    I just want to go home



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  • #2
    We all lose control...

    Nice poem sweetie. You might get more feedback if you replied to other peoples poems. Just a hint.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Bob Berkowitz
      We all lose control...

      Nice poem sweetie. You might get more feedback if you replied to other peoples poems. Just a hint.
      I do and I have, but not so many i find interesting

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Bob Berkowitz
        We all lose control...

        Nice poem sweetie. You might get more feedback if you replied to other peoples poems. Just a hint.
        Oh and thank you 'Wink" but its not about control 'Smile"

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