A Rhyme Full Of Vain

[P8ANUTS]

A Rhyme Full Of Vain

It's calling my name, My reflection to blame,
I'm losing my all, Now crazy insane
With seven years of pain, this shit still remains,
I'm burning in flames, Crying Jesus for rain
I've waited for tomorrow, but everythangs the same
No this aint no faze, Hell no this aint no game,
Look at my trail, aint shit but shit stains
What am I to do, It's calling my name,
This disorder brain, Fuck no it aint a shame
I have no clue from where it came
I wanna go, Still I hang,
A bit of hope for this may change
It's driving me towards it, speeding on both lanes,
No more suffer it contains
I will never ever rage
This knife in the kitchen for peace on my vein,
It's calling my name because I'm so VAIN


please note "copyright"

[Harmon]

It's calling my name, My reflection to blame,
I'm losing my all, Now crazy insane
[this is nice right here, couldve made it better but overrall nice]

I have no clue from where it came
I wanna go, Still I hang,
A bit of hope for this may change
It's driving me towards it, speeding on both lanes,
[thats some more ill verses girl]

Well another nice piece..whatevers highlighted is what i thought stood out

[P8ANUTS]

Well another nice piece..whatevers highlighted is what i thought stood out

i really appreciate it man! ao i take it as u rhyme>?

[Harmon]

yeah i rhyme...i like word-play, and love syllable sound rhyming its my ear-orgasm


i'll do a verse on one of your poems if you'd like
you pick the poem and topic

[P8ANUTS]

yeah i rhyme...i like word-play, and love syllable sound rhyming its my ear-orgasm


i'll do a verse on one of your poems if you'd like
you pick the poem and topic

Alright, lets see what you got. Do a verse on this one

A Computer Dream To My Heart

Do I know you? I've sworn we've met before,
But just a dream it is, Just a dream you are
A computer dream to my heart
Love I've never seen, but pictures on a screen
A face of the sweetest living thing,
with words that tickles this heart of mine.
No proof whether it's truth or lies,
But I buy, as I wait for that time where it's but a dream,
But a dream, you and me without a computer screen
and key boards keying love scenes.
What is it that you've done to me? I have hard times sleeping
I think of you while I whisper your name as if it's you who's next to me,
But it's just me masterbating
Visions of you no longer loving my face, but this secret place
only you would know and others wishing to meet,
A bare place with the softness of a babys bottom,
and beautifully pink like little piglets
The creation of our little secrets our bodies began to tell in the dark
And the secrets we'll always keep when it's time to go home,
But I wouldn't want to go home
"Come away with me" as we listen to Norah Jones,
Lets listen with our lips and dance with our hands
"Come away with me, Come away"
So lonely, but I choose to hold off
for it is something that you've done to me.
Do I know you? I've sworn we've met before?
But just a dream it is, Just a dream you are
A computer dream to my heart,
hoping time will come where you and me are, but a dream
far from a computer screen


Please note "copyright"

[P8ANUTS]

well david i don't know if u've noticed, but I'm jen "Wink" Say, whats your nationality? I'd figure u're white, just because u say shadey, but I could be wrong

[Harmon]

hehe....

Yeah, Jen...I know, sorry I've been gone a few days, can't post unless I'm at the house. I'll write something to that, just give me day or so to collect thought, topics take more time than my normal scattered thoughts!

Yes...I'm white, caucasian whatever...My moms German, and dads American so I'm like a mixture

I have MSN, and AIM...They are better sources to chat with me at try me there sometime...My info should be in my profile here

[Harmon]

heres my verse

computer dreams discussed over two different computer screens,
live a life fulla promises loosely gripped by the jeans!
see to you im just a name, in a world where you aint
able to grip grains cause your busy with the game
so im pissy with the shame, while you miss me in the chain
kinda tipsy but i aint, so if you get me raise your chain
i try to hide it but it shows, cause a feelings always bold
i can feel it when it grows, when you see it an you dont
im the presence that you feel, when you think i appear
when you wonder im around, so no wonder im always down
so i speak to your neck, with my tongue when its wet
like it fast, like it slow doesnt matter you'll forget!
im a pimp, im a hoe, and in bed it all shows
but you love me than you dont, so fuck it here it goes

crazy and strange lately its basically everything that it aint
pain stays in vein so my mutual feelin is pasted to your face
you taste it an complain, get up and just throw it all away
see im different but i aint
you can love me durin hate, so you rub the dirt away
And continue with the pain
i shoveled it for years, during troubles i was scared
but i knew that she cared so it meant that the repairs,
really werent needed but that wouldnt last for no longer than a year
so it grew an it stumbled, but it regained its composure
just to stumble again
who knew this fuckin shit would run into trouble again
so for the reasons that i do, and the reasons that i dont
i love women but i dont let em get close or take hold
cause everytime i do, i just get left out in the cold

[P8ANUTS]

computer dreams discussed over two different computer screens,
live a life fulla promises loosely gripped by the jeans!
see to you im just a name, in a world where you aint
able to grip grains cause your busy with the game
so im pissy with the shame, while you miss me in the chain
kinda tipsy but i aint, so if you get me raise your chain
i try to hide it but it shows, cause a feelings always bold
i can feel it when it grows, when you see it an you dont
im the presence that you feel, when you think i appear
when you wonder im around, so no wonder im always down
so i speak to your neck, with my tongue when its wet
like it fast, like it slow doesnt matter you'll forget!
im a pimp, im a hoe, and in bed it all shows
but you love me than you dont, so fuck it here it goes

crazy and strange lately its basically everything that it aint
pain stays in vein so my mutual feelin is pasted to your face
you taste it an complain, get up and just throw it all away
see im different but i aint
you can love me durin hate, so you rub the dirt away
And continue with the pain
i shoveled it for years, during troubles i was scared
but i knew that she cared so it meant that the repairs,
really werent needed but that wouldnt last for no longer than a year
so it grew an it stumbled, but it regained its composure
just to stumble again
who knew this fuckin shit would run into trouble again
so for the reasons that i do, and the reasons that i dont
i love women but i dont let em get close or take hold
cause everytime i do, i just get left out in the cold

Haaaaaa, I'm so feeling you right now 'Giggle' You got words man, real talk. First verse ight, but that second one I am on! Real nice! I gotta give it to u. Damn ha. So what do u write about? I'm interested now

[Harmon]

lol....thanks jen


i dunno i write about everything an anything....its limitless

[P8ANUTS]

lol....thanks jen


i dunno i write about everything an anything....its limitless

so do u just rhyme or u rhyme to soon make a living off it?

[Harmon]

nah i make my money else where i just have fun with this...it'd be nice to make some $$$ off it tho