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    You've inspired me to start writing again
    not about love and acception
    but about lies and deception
    no acception to the rule
    on who's the fool
    I loveded you
    gave you my all
    twenty six years of
    what I've learned
    and who I've come to be
    a lifetime of good teachings
    I gave my heart to you
    months ago
    when "no" was obsolete
    in my dictionary
    I gave you my heart
    when my vunerability was obvious
    I laughed with you
    cried beside you
    and when I looked into your eyes
    I died and was reborn inside you
    This heart was once yours
    I'd surrendered it all to you
    but now these feeling I had
    are gone out the door
    and I'm shutting it behind me
    because this love that was made is now lost
    and my heart no longer
    belongs to you.

    Guys, let a newcomer know what you think.
    Last edited by Lyrical_Shine; 12-10-2003, 9:37 PM.

  • #2
    Very deep. I like this poem. I can feel your plight from the start. Welcome to the board.

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    • #3
      "loveded"?

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