Shards

[TemperGirl]

Shards
Jan 7, 2004


tiny crystals drip and fall
down a porclain figures face
taint the floors with innocence
shatter down in blissful grace

flowing fast from out the eyes
of the torpid silhouette
all her hopes of future dreams
a plague of meaningless regret

a trove of feelings locked away
choke her as they turn to cries
stay imprisoned in her mind
still seen in her infected eyes

the diamonds fallen from her face
remain in shards of bright array
with nothing left to hope or dream
she let them slice her feet away


tell me wachya think..?

[Ryan McBain]

Im a huge fan of the depressing poems, so I like this. I can tell your talking about tears. I like how you described it all.

[johnny trance]

GOOD STUFF. sad but good.

[BleedingAkasha]

fantastic...you've used plenty of imagery here, gothic imagery at that. my favorite. keep posting

[TemperGirl]

yay! thank you all!