fireworks

[StaRgaZer]

Rhetoric flows from me
Like transient energy
-poetically
Torn because I live empathically
Consciousness berates me constantly
Fireworks on the streets of my brain
Alone amongst millions, only truth remains
Words keep me from going insane
That it has come to this is such a shame, such a shame

[Ryan McBain]

I can't believe I didn't reply to this sooner. I really like this.

"Torn because I live empathically
Consciousness berates me constantly"

Nice

[StaRgaZer]

Thanks man, I appreciate gettin some feedback.........it sat there for a long time with no replies.....

[Genesis]

Alone amongst millions, only truth remains
Words keep me from going insane

you captured why I started rap in this one line. Girl, you got MAD skill and your stuff is always hot. Loved that one.

[JIMBEAN]

Fireworks on the streets of my brain
no ones imagry could compare that your briliant.. child..

[StaRgaZer]

Thanks jimbean and genisis............. jimbean, you read your pm's or what?

[JIMBEAN]

Thanks jimbean and genisis............. jimbean, you read your pm's or what?

yeah but just dont have much time to reply ill get back to you soon....